Talk:Steins;Gate Drama CD Alpha, Beta, and Gamma/GA1
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 19:01, 19 February 2017 (UTC)
Looks good at a first glance. I should finish this by tomorrow. JAGUAR 19:01, 19 February 2017 (UTC)
- It might be worth mentioning in the lead that the trilogy is recorded in Japanese only, or at least released only in Japan
Done
- It might also be worth mentioning that Gamma got an English translation in the lead
- Done
- Link light novel both in the lead and reception section. I didn't know what they were until now
- Light novel is already linked in the production/release section
- "He discovers that he in this world line is a Rounder" - He discovers that in this world line, he is a Rounder partnered with...
- Done
- "but Moeka manages to send a D-mail that undoes the world line shift" - how about but Moeka manages to send a D-mail that prevents the world line from shifting?
- Well, Okabe shifts to gamma in the beginning of the drama. In the end, Moeka undoes that shift, returning the world to the previous attractor field. I don't think "prevents" is quite right, as the original shift has already happened. I changed it to
but Moeka manages to send a D-mail that causes a world line shift, away from the gamma attractor field.
- is this okay?
- Well, Okabe shifts to gamma in the beginning of the drama. In the end, Moeka undoes that shift, returning the world to the previous attractor field. I don't think "prevents" is quite right, as the original shift has already happened. I changed it to
- Ah, I see! Like I said, I don't know anything about the story so your suggestion sounds much better. Thanks. JAGUAR 21:17, 20 February 2017 (UTC)
- "and distributed by Media Factory as three CD albums in 2010" - and distributed by Media Factory as three separate CD albums in 2010
- Done
- No dead links. I've checked what I could translate as I'm hopeless with Japanese
This is impressive work. It is compact, well written, and comprehensive for the subject. I couldn't find many issues with it at all, so once all of the above are clarified then this should be good to go. 
JAGUAR 20:54, 20 February 2017 (UTC)
- @Jaguar: Thanks! I think I have fixed everything, with the possible exception of the "Moeka manages to..." sentence, which might require further feedback.--IDVtalk 21:15, 20 February 2017 (UTC)
- Thanks for addressing them all! This article meets the GA criteria, so I'll promote this without further ado. Well done—this one was an interesting read.
JAGUAR 21:17, 20 February 2017 (UTC)
- Thank you. I hope to have the Wipeout review done tonight or tomorrow, by the way.--IDVtalk 21:20, 20 February 2017 (UTC)
- Thanks for addressing them all! This article meets the GA criteria, so I'll promote this without further ado. Well done—this one was an interesting read.
