Talk:Stefan Wever/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 14:26, 1 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Happy to review this. On first glance this needs minor changes to meet the GA criteria.

"Because of continued pain in his shoulder, he instead spent the season with the AAA Columbus Clippers...", the reference cited doesn't confirm the bit in bold.
"After the seven games, he visited ~~with~~ Dr. James Andrews". That whole sentence could be rejigged as it reads a tad disjoint. Perhaps something like, "After the seven games, he visited Dr. James Andrews, who diagnosed the twinge he suffered two years earlier as a torn rotator cuff and torn labrum; it explained why he had been throwing 85 mph since the injury, compared to 95 mph beforehand"
"and spent the rest of the year rehabbing the injury", I'm unfamiliar with this. Perhaps reword for the benefit of readers outside North America?
"While working at his bar, Wever also returned to baseball in a coaching role.", how about 'made a return'?

No dab or dead links. No issues with references. Will pass once comments have been addressed, on hold till then. Lemonade51 (talk) 14:26, 1 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Issued fixed. Thanks for the review! Wizardman 14:40, 1 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]