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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 21:53, 17 December 2012 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- Some things that are italicized don't need to be ("Luftwaffe", "Wehrmacht" are both common enough in English), but others aren't and need to be (Operation Nordlicht).
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- "to deploy two battalions consisting of 10,000 men" - this may be different in Norway, but battalions are fairly small units (around a thousand or fewer men). Should this be two brigades?
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Just a few small nitpicks, otherwise this article looks ready to go. Good job. Parsecboy (talk) 21:53, 17 December 2012 (UTC)
- I have tended to your comments, and done some other minor copyedits as well. You were right about the battalion/brigade issue, luckily the source was found online. Geschichte (talk) 14:23, 13 January 2013 (UTC)
- Just a few small nitpicks, otherwise this article looks ready to go. Good job. Parsecboy (talk) 21:53, 17 December 2012 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail:
- Passed per above. Wizardman 00:51, 14 January 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks for taking care of it, Wizardman. Parsecboy (talk) 12:52, 14 January 2013 (UTC)
- Thank you all three for looking after the article. I am sorry I have not had the health to stop by Wikipedia at late. I will remember the italicization rules to next time :) Arsenikk (talk) 21:42, 23 January 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks for taking care of it, Wizardman. Parsecboy (talk) 12:52, 14 January 2013 (UTC)
- Passed per above. Wizardman 00:51, 14 January 2013 (UTC)