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GA Review

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Reviewer: --Hadger 18:26, 10 January 2010 (UTC) I (Hadger) am requesting someone else to review this, because I think it may need expansion, so I wouldn't really be good at reviewing it.[reply]

Secondary comments

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I know I beat the initial reviewer, but I wanted to point out a few things:

  • The plot is still rather thin. Are there no text-based cutscenes or anything else to help flesh it out? Given that its a Star Wars game there should be enough of a plot to warrant its own section. I realize its a GBA game, but a two paragraph plot should be a minimum. I like the inclusion of a link to The Phantom Menace's plot, but don't be afraid to repeat parts of that plot if their specific to the game. If the game really doesn't have anything to drive plot-wise that's fine, but if there's anything that can expand the plot that would help passing GAN much easier.
  • Per WP:PLOTSUM the plot itself does not need to be sourced from external sources. External sources help, but are not necessary. Don't worry about sourcing it if you can't, just expand it, and source what you can externally. --Teancum (talk) 01:05, 11 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Secondary opinion: Teancum (talk) 21:04, 10 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I don't think I would really be the type who reviews this article because it should be expanded. You can review it if you want. --Hadger 21:11, 10 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Sure. You can review it if you want to. Thanks, by the way! :) --Hadger 22:46, 10 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Prose

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Plot

Gameplay

  • There are a total of nine levels in it: "Trade Federation Landing Craft", "Naboo Swamp", "Naboo Swamp and Sacred Place", "Coruscant", "Catacombs of Theed", "Streets of Theed", "Queen Amidala's Palace", and "The Final Battle". needs to be removed entirely per WP:GAMETRIVIA. A list of levels simply isn't encyclopedic.
  • It needs to mention that the player controls Obi-Wan, even though its obvious (as the game might allow for one-off controlling of other characters)
  • to control his lightsaber and blaster should not mention gender. Change his to their

Reception

-Teancum (talk) 16:37, 13 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the comments. I think I have addressed them all. :) Theleftorium 18:46, 13 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

PASS --Teancum (talk) 19:25, 13 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]