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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 14:48, 4 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewing this article. MWright96 (talk) 14:48, 4 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Background

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  • "Afterwards it saw success in broadcast syndication," - Afterward
  • "Kaufman claimed that Paramount attributed this to the idea that science fiction fans wouldn't go see two films released so close together." - would not

Conception

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  • "At the time, TOS was being broadcast on 137 stations in the United States in syndication," - I think TOS should be spelt out for consistency
  • The "s" in "radicalisation" should be a "z"

Crew and production design

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  • "He described his concerns saying that he didn't want to" - did not

Cancellation

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  • Delink NBC as it already link in the background sub-section

References

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Not too many problems I found. On hold until issues are dealt with. MWright96 (talk) 18:57, 4 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96: Thanks - I've address all those issues. Thank you for doing the review. Miyagawa (talk) 19:27, 4 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@Miyagawa: Can now pass this article. MWright96 (talk) 19:45, 4 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]