Talk:Standing asanas/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 04:21, 26 April 2020 (UTC)

Many thanks as always. Chiswick Chap (talk) 07:29, 26 April 2020 (UTC)

Criteria

1. Prose ✓ Pass

2. Verifiability ✓ Pass

3. Depth of Coverage ✓ Pass

4. Neutral ✓ Pass

5. Stable ✓ Pass

6. Illustrations ✓ Pass

7. Miscellaneous ✓ Pass

Comments

1.

• " Gheranda Samhita" should probably be italicized in all instances, as it's the name of a book. Also, the use of diacritic marks should be consistent

Done.

• "Gheranda Samhita II.27" - Sometimes you use Arabic numerals to represent this such as 2.36, while other times, you use the Roman numerals. If this is the same section, it should be consistent

Good catch. Sorted.

• B. K. S. Iyengar is a duplink

Fixed.

• Krishnamacharya is a duplink, both in the shortened form and in his full name later.

Fixed.

• Vinyasas is a duplink

Fixed.

2.

• Can citation(s) be added to the table, especially for the English names, described by, and dates?

Added.

• "It is described in the 17th century hatha yoga text Gheraṇḍa Saṃhitā 2.36." - Doesn't seem to be in the citation, although I may have missed it

What you've quoted is the citation... I've repeated the ref to the online version for you.

• Refs 16-19 need accessdate

Done.

• I went ahead and fixed the dashes

Many thanks.

• If locations are known for the books, that would be nice to add, but not a big deal

Rather not, thanks.

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Placing on hold. Hog Farm (talk) 16:22, 27 April 2020 (UTC)

Passing. Hog Farm (talk) 01:15, 28 April 2020 (UTC)