Talk:Stan Musial/GA1
GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman 16:24, 24 December 2009 (UTC) I'll be reviewing this over the course of the next couple days (splitting it up due to size). Here's some issues I found:
All hyphens for numbers need to use ndashes, i.e. 6-6 record needs to be 6–6 record.- "Musial also played one season on the newly revived Donora High School baseball team, where one of his teammates was the grandfather of future major league player Ken Griffey, Jr." By extension, he's be the father of Ken Griffey Sr. too, so that should probably be added.
- Done. Monowi (talk) 09:26, 6 January 2010 (UTC)
- Images need WP:ALT text (I could care less about it, but if you want to go for FAC then they'll want it).
- Done. Monowi (talk) 09:49, 6 January 2010 (UTC)
- "However, the Cardinals finished one game behind the Dodgers in the standings." Be more specific; were they one game away from the pennant, or were the two further down in the standings; how many games did they win?
- "The twelfth All-Star appearance of Musial's career occurred in 1955, when Cincinnati's Ted Kluszewski outpolled Musial by 150,000 votes to win the start at first base" Reword; now it sounds like he got the appearance because of losing the voted.
I'll put the article on hold and pass when this is fixed. I was surprised how little there was to modify, so good job on it. Wizardman Help review good articles 16:26, 31 December 2009 (UTC)
- I fixed the final couple points, so I'll pass this as a GA. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 22:34, 7 January 2010 (UTC)