Talk:St Michael's Church, Llanfihangel Ysgeifiog/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Moswento (talk · contribs) 13:47, 10 September 2013 (UTC)

Hello! I'll be reviewing this one. Comments to follow below in the next few days. I don't anticipate there being many of them. Take care, Moswento ^talky 13:47, 10 September 2013 (UTC)

Thanks. "Operation Anglesey" is getting there slowly... Bencherlite^Talk 19:22, 10 September 2013 (UTC)

Overalls

Well, this was a thoroughly pleasant article to read and a very easy article to review. The prose is of a generally excellent quality, the sources used are all reliable and, where I'm able to check, support the statements of the article. The images are nice. The article covers all of the main aspects of the church's history and condition - maybe a bit more about the restoration work would be nice, but not essential for GA. I just have three comments that are very very minor, and then I'll be ready to promote. Another victory for Operation Anglesey! Moswento ^talky 07:57, 11 September 2013 (UTC)

Lead

• "is a former parish church, now closed and in ruins, in Anglesey, north Wales." - (an optional suggestion) I'm wondering if "is a former parish church in Anglesey, north Wales, which is now closed and in ruins" would work better.

History Mystery

• "in conjunction of that of" - "in conjunction with that of"?

Architecture

• "slate from the 18th and 19th century." - "18th and 19th centuries"? I'm not 100% sure about this grammatically...

Thanks for your review. I've reworded each of the items in question, hopefully to your satisfaction. I'd love to know more about the restoration work, too, but I haven't found anything more in the regular places... Bencherlite^Talk 09:31, 11 September 2013 (UTC)

Yep, I am 100.05% satisfied! Promoting accordingly - keep up the good work! Moswento ^talky 09:49, 11 September 2013 (UTC)