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  1. Update reference to St John of God Health Care to read: St John of God Health Care is one of the largest Catholic providers of health care services in Australia.[1]
  2. We do not have 30 birth suites that reference is wrong.

References

  1. ^ https://sjog.org.au. {{cite web}}: Missing or empty |title= (help)

AnneGartner (talk) 08:57, 5 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hi AnneGartner. Thank you for your suggestions. I am declining the first edit request for two reasons. First, the claim that your hospital network is the largest in Australia needs to supported by an independent source. I can't just take your organization's word for it. Second, labeling a hospital network the "largest" is vague and ambiguous. St John could be the largest by hospital beds, by expenditures, or by number of doctors; but the point is, Wikipedia articles should avoid using vaguely positive terms when more specific descriptions would do better.
Your second edit request is  Done. Per Wikipedia's verifiability policy, unsourced statements can be challenged and removed. Best, Altamel (talk) 19:26, 5 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Talk page watchers, please see a relevant discussion at WP:COIN. Altamel (talk) 19:26, 5 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]