Talk:St Catherine's Hill, Hampshire/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: APK (talk · contribs) 01:54, 7 December 2023 (UTC)

Hello, I'll be reviewing this one. APK hi :-) (talk) 01:54, 7 December 2023 (UTC)

Many thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:08, 7 December 2023 (UTC)

Lede...

• 43 hectares is converted into 110 acres, but the infobox says 106 acres
  • Formatted both with the same parameters.

• Add England or UK after "Hampshire"
  • Done.

• Comma after "college"
  • Not needed in such a short sentence in British diction.

• Maybe swap the link from Iron Age to Iron Age
  • Done.

• scheduled monument isn't capitalized on that page. Yours is capitalized. Which one is correct?
  • Changed.

• Change Black Death link to Black Death
  • Done.

• Same thing mentioned above with Early modern
  • Done.

History...

Iron Age...

• Link "ramparts"
  • Done.

• Swap the Iron Age link and change the scheduled monument capitalization if needed
  • Done.

• Link "Wessex"
  • Done.

Medieval to Early Modern...

• link "copse"
  • Done.

• change the Black Death link mentioned above
  • Done.

Modern...

• Is "away" needed in "rolling away down the hill"?
  • Gone.

• comma after "ownership"
  • Done.

• change link of "Twyford Down protests" to Twyford Down protests
  • Done.

Natural history...

Geology...

• comma after "Winchester area"
  • Added.

Ecology...

• Are the plants not linked on purpose because it would be too many links?
  • Linked.

Categories...

• Category:Nature reserves in Hampshire is the parent category of Category:Sites of Special Scientific Interest in Hampshire.
  • Then either the cat structure is incorrect, as not all SSSIs are nature reserves; or, since many of the SSSIs happen to be nature reserves, it's a partial and therefore non-diffusing relationship. Shame the cat system doesn't have a way of marking this distinction.

• Same with Category:Winchester and Category:Winchester College, but I assume that's because both are covered by the topic.
  • Lost the Winchester cat.

• Earwig's Copyvio Detector shows 80.9% overlap between a blog post. Did you write the post? APK hi :-) (talk) 02:39, 7 December 2023 (UTC)
  • I didn't.
    • I checked the edit history and it appears the blogger copied and pasted content from here. Everything looks great! Nice work. APK hi :-) (talk) 09:30, 7 December 2023 (UTC)