Talk:St Andrew Holborn (parish)
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Organization of the page
[edit]Are the various paragraphs and sections in this article out of order? For instance, the section entitled Geography would be better put immediately below the introduction. Even still "The ancient parish included most of the Holborn area to the west,..." leaves me wondering 'to the west...of what?'.
The discussion of Thavies Inn comes out of nowhere.
The map of Civil Parishes of the City of London would be far better placed at the end of the article (or completely omitted). The smaller map of Civil Parishes of St. Giles and Holborn Districts needs to be expanded and placed above the discussion of the parishes within Holborn District.
I hope someone with more knowledge of this area than myself could make these adjustments and thus present a much more readable piece.