Talk:St. Louis Eagles

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Article milestones
Date	Process	Result
March 2, 2011	Good article nominee	Listed

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 19:38, 1 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article tonight. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 19:38, 1 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Overall this article is good, though I have a few concerns:

"Founded as the Ottawa Senators they endured" comma after Senators
"Despite winning the Stanley Cup 1927" in 1927
"Following the franchises" franchise's
"In 1931 an ice hockey rink" comma after 1931
"In their first game the Eagles succumbed to a late rally by the defending Stanley Cup champion Black Hawks losing 3–1" comma after hawks
"Under Boucher's coaching the team showed improvement" comma after improvement.
"the Eagles ownership had lost $70,000 due primarily to the cost of traveiling" comma after 70,000, plus it's traveling
Should just be Midwestern instead of Mid-Western
"This time the NHL refused.[34] The Eagles were put up for sale." those sentences would work better combined.
"and the two players were the only Eagle's players" rm apostrophe

Mainly it was just punctuation issues. I'll put the article on hold and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 04:36, 2 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thank You for the review! I have made all of the changes noted above. Let me know if there is anything else that needs addressing. Cheers--Mo Rock...Monstrous (leech44) 04:55, 2 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Everything looks good now, so I'll pass the article as a GA. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 05:12, 2 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]