Talk:St. Elmo (1910 Thanhouser film)/GA1
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Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 12:05, 1 February 2015 (UTC)
Lead section
- "The scenario was adapted by Lloyd Lonergan from Augusta Jane Evans's 1866 novel of the same name." Possible that you could link the novel?
- "The film follows St. Elmo who is engaged to his cousin Agnes, he is betrayed by his friend Dick Hammond who has an affair with Agnes." I suggest rewriting to: "The film follows St. Elmo who is engaged to his cousin Agnes, being betrayed by his friend Dick Hammond who has an affair with Agnes.
- "The production was met with mixed reviews by critics, but was successful." Financially successful I am guessing.
Release and reception
- Link The Morning Telegraph.
- "The film is presumed lost." Any known reason why?
References
- Link the publishers of these sources.
Categories
- Add this film to the lost films category.
Placing it on hold for now. good888 (talk) 15:20, 1 February 2015 (UTC)
- @Good888: All set, and yes the film was financially successful, but also exceeded demands requiring additional copies to be produced as noted in the body. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 17:10, 2 February 2015 (UTC)
- OK. Promoting to GA class as the issues have been addressed. good888 (talk) 09:11, 4 February 2015 (UTC)
- @Good888: All set, and yes the film was financially successful, but also exceeded demands requiring additional copies to be produced as noted in the body. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 17:10, 2 February 2015 (UTC)