Talk:St. Anne School (Columbus, Georgia)

St. Anne School (Columbus, Georgia) was nominated as a Social sciences and society good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (July 4, 2011). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated.

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This review is transcluded from Talk:St. Anne‒Pacelli Catholic School/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Moray An Par (talk) 07:39, 1 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

July 4 read

Link to http://www.sasphs.net/tuition.htm is dead.
Is "St. Anne‒Pacelli" the correct dash? Or should it be a hyphen? If the saint's name is Anne-Pacelli then it should be a hyphen but if the school is named after St. Anne and some other person named Pacelli then it should be an en dash as it is now.
Lead is soooooo short. It should summarize the article. Expand it. See WP:LEAD.
The infobox should also summarize the salient points of the article. I find it weird that Reverend Monsignor Herman J. Deimel wasn't mentioned in the body.
If it's not affiliated with Muscogee County School District, why should it be mentioned?
What is ref three citing for? The whole history section? If so then it should be cited in every sentence/paragraph whereever necessary. Same case for athletics section.
Use en dashes to indicate duration. 1958–2008 → 1958–2008. See WP:DASH.
Paragraph two of Academics section is not cited.
Do not external link Nathan Rustin Fitness Center. See WP:EL.
Do not list facilities. Describe only those which are remarkable.
Get more references, especially third-party ones.
Please see WP:WPSCH/AG. This article doesn't follow it. I am going to fail this. Consider renominating after adhering to the guidelines and getting a copy-edit from the WP:GUILD.

Moray An Par (talk) 01:52, 4 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]