Talk:Srimanthudu/GA1

GA Review

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 14:24, 29 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I'll finish this one shortly JAGUAR 14:24, 29 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality:

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources:

B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

C. No original research:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects:

B. Focused:
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias:
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc:
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:

Initial comments

"and played the film's protagonist" - I feel that the protagonist's name should be mentioned here
"and encouraged the adoption of village in Telangana and Andhra Pradesh" - should this either be a village or villages?
"Harsha Vardhan is the sole heir of his father Ravikanth's business empire worth 250 billion" - no rupee symbol here?
"A possible delay was expected as Mahesh had earlier agreed to work in a film" - on a film
"All lyrics written by Ramajogayya Sastry, except where noted." - this sentence is unsourced
" called a feat that India's then prime minister Narendra Modi‍‍ '‍s" - isn't he the current prime minister?

Close - promoted

I couldn't find anything worthy of putting this on hold, so I can conclude that this article outright meets the GA criteria. Well done! I think this is your best one yet. It is comprehensive, well written and the references are also fine. I enjoyed reading this one JAGUAR 15:58, 29 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review Jaguar! I've resolved all those comments you have listed.

Pavanjandhyala (talk) 16:18, 29 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]