Talk:Square Enix Montreal/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 18:12, 9 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I'll give this a review. Wizardman 18:12, 9 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Here's what I found:

The Go series link in the infobox can be removed, since it's just redirecting right back to this article.
"And they viewed the critical response to Deus Ex Go" Don't start a sentence with and.
i'm not a fan of starting them with but either if you can changed the sentence in that one as well, though that's not a deal breaker.

Not much to modify, article's on hold until fixed. Wizardman 02:24, 15 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, @Wizardman! Done. It should be okay to start a sentence with "And" as long as it isn't a fragment, but no complaint here—I found a better rephrase anyway. czar 08:11, 15 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good now. Using and for a sentence beginning isn't technically an MOS violation, it just looks wrong to me and ruins article flow. Anyway, the article passes as a GA. Wizardman 15:41, 15 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]