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Nominator: Skyshifter (talk · contribs)

Reviewer: Nkon21 (talk · contribs) 04:24, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I love Porter Robinson! I will review this within the week right now. ɴᴋᴏɴ21 ❯❯❯ talk 04:24, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]


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  • After releasing 2010 hit → After released his 2010 single
    • I'd like to emphasize that "Say My Name" was a hit
  • Robinson wanted to try different styles of music by developing an EP, moving away from his eurodance style. → Robinson expressed desire to explore various musical genres by producing an EP, diverging from his traditional eurodance style.
    • Done; used "different" instead of "various"
  • Spanning multiple genres, Spitfire was the first release on Owsla and crashed Beatport after musicians Skrillex and Tiësto publicized it → Spanning a range of genres, Spitfire marked the inaugural release on Owsla and caused Beatport to crash following its promotion by musicians Skrillex and Tiësto.
    • Done
  • It chartedSpitfire charted
    • Done
  • and Robinson later toured in support of it → with Robinson subsequently embarking on a tour to promote it.
    • Done
  • Robinson said he always wanted to do an → Robinson expressed desire to produce an
    • Done
  • as that allowed for different styles of music that his fans could not be fond of → as it provided an opportunity to experiment with different musical styles that might not necessarily appeal to his fans.
    • Done; used "could" instead of "might"
  • and these became his → who became his
    • Done
  • to his older releases → to his previous works
    • Done
  • Kerri Mason wrote to Kerri Mason wrote for
    • Done (still need to figure out the difference between "to" and "for"...)
  • After getting Skrillex's attention with "Say My Name" → After capturing Skrillex's interest with "Say My Name"
    • Done
  • Can you find a better source other than Soundcloud on ref 10?
    • I couldn't find any reliable sources talking about the release of Bonus Remixes, so it has to be a primary source.
  • libertarian websites such as The Daily Paul, Lew Rockwell's blog and Reason wrote about "The State", which contains excerpts from For a New Liberty by Murray N. Rothbard, as narrated by Jeff Riggenbach. → libertarian websites including The Daily Paul, Lew Rockwell's blog, and Reason expressed interest towards "The State", highlighting its incorporation of excerpts from For a New Liberty by Murray N. Rothbard, as voiced by Jeff Riggenbach.
    • Done
  • Who named him "the libertarian dubstep guy"?
    • Done (attributed)
  • John Ochoa wrote to → John Ochoa penned to
    • Changed structure / used another word
  • on Robinson's discography → in Robinson's discography
    • Done (I still confuse "in" and "on" a lot...)
  • Add a headline parameter for the track list template
  • Sources should be archived (bot)
    • Done

That's all I have! ɴᴋᴏɴ21 ❯❯❯ talk 06:54, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Nkon21: thank you! All responded. Skyshiftertalk 12:34, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.