Talk:Spirituality and homelessness
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[edit]Hi Alison, Overall this is a good piece on a topic that there is not much literature on. However, the neutrality of the article is at stake when you do not mention minority viewpoints such as the view that spirituality could hinder the mental and physical health outcomes, or perhaps controversies regarding churches that provide help only when homeless people attend a service (if any such controversies exist). More links or a “see also” section should be added in order to better incorporate your article into other Wikipedia content. Finally, I would recommend changing the first image on your article - I don't think it fits in very well with the subject of the article. This is a new article - has it been reviewed by a seasoned Wikipedia member yet? If not, I recommend that you tag it for review/cleanup. Allisonshields (talk) 23:47, 31 March 2014 (UTC)
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[edit]I think you did a great job on this article and it provides a lot of information that is general but also captures a lot by going into the specific groups. I think that it would be really interesting to get an institutional side of this- how does spirituality engage with efforts to help the homeless? Overall, you did a great job with the article and rewording some sentences will get it to its A game. Thanks! Gracieoribamise (talk) 02:01, 1 April 2014 (UTC)