Talk:Spherical Objects (band)

Uncyclopedic remarks

Some sentences in this entry sound they we're uttered by a self-sufficient record shop employee.

Examples: "However, this twisted voice adds even more to the idiosyncratic character of the music." - There's a lot of personal opinion in deciding if the singer has a twisted voice.

", which sounds more diy than everything they did afterwards." - This is hardly an encyclopedic tone, "everything" seems like a generalization. It would help if the characteristics of the record were described instead of referring to DIY aesthetique as whole.

There are several other examples. Someone with a thorough knowledge of the discography should rewrite the article in a more formal style.

William —Preceding unsigned comment added by 84.238.113.244 (talk) 15:15, 4 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Generally speaking, I think you are right. Due to the lack of reliable resources, there is much of subjective material in the article (although it conforms to the general impression from reading various personal web pages and blogs and on Trouser Press link which is listed in External Links section). An upgrade via a rewrite that would also include properly referenced material is definitely needed. I'll see what I can do for the latter but I will leave copy editing to more fluent english speakers. Dipa1965 (talk) 23:58, 6 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Already made a few changes, I think it seems a bit better now Dipa1965 (talk) 00:39, 7 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

author's reservations

I still have some reservations for the last entity (about Solamar changing genders). Although that info comes from a rather reliable source, I 'm not sure whether it might be offensive. Please feel free to erase that paragraph if needed. User:Dipa1965 12:14, 22 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

images and text wanted (desperately)

Whoever has anything to contribute to this article, particularly band photos or news about Solamar, please do so by directly contributing or posting here (btw, Patrick, thanx a lot!) Dipa1965 16:41, 21 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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