Talk:Spec Ops: The Line/GA1
GA Review
[edit]| GA toolbox |
|---|
| Reviewing |
Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch
Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 21:34, 4 April 2016 (UTC)
I'll have this finished within a day or two. JAGUAR 21:34, 4 April 2016 (UTC)
Initial comments
[edit]- I converted all dates to mdy, if that's OK
- "It was also later released for OS X and Linux in 2013 and 2015 respectively" - comma needed after 2015
- "It is the eleventh title, and a reboot, in the Spec Ops series" - may read better as of the Spec ops series
- "The player needs to make morally grey decisions" - sounds informal/vague. Just "moral decisions" is fine
- "Williams later added that adding achievements"- link achievements (video gaming)
- I noticed Polygon isn't italicised in the review box
- No dead links
- No dup links
I couldn't find anything worthy enough to put this on hold, so I'll pass it now. All in all, it meets the criteria. Well done 
JAGUAR 20:18, 5 April 2016 (UTC)
- @Jaguar: Thanks for the review! I have addressed the issues you raised above. I am not sure why Polygon isn't italicized in the review box though. AdrianGamer (talk) 15:53, 6 April 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks for this! Glad this finally got that recognition. I want to try to make it a featured article. 74.97.71.70 (talk) 02:18, 1 September 2016 (UTC)