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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 09:27, 7 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this one later today. For some reason I hadn't noticed this was a Psyche episode (I thought it was a Spongebob Squarepants episode for some bizarre reason which I know extremely little about!). Anyway, I'll be out for the afternoon, but I'll aim to review this after that. Miyagawa (talk) 09:27, 7 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I managed to get some time before I went out, so I might as well at least make a start on the review now.

  • Image: Not entirely sure the infobox image meets the Wikipedia:Non-free content guidelines. We've recently had a lot of image culling in Star Trek articles for the same reason, and I'm not 100% certain that this would cut it in a review. However, I'm happy to stick on the side of keeping it for now and someone with a more deletionist mantra can always look at it later.
  • Yeah, I was a bit shocked at the mass deletion of the Star Trek images. It seemed like a lot of them actually met the NFC guidelines. I'll leave the image for one of the deletionists to decide.
  • Lead: Is there anything about the critical response you might like to highlight in the lead (any increase to the third paragraph would help to balance the three paragraph sizes)?
  • Added a couple of sentences.
  • Image: You don't need to link Steve Franks in the image caption as it is already linked prominently in the article.
  • Removed link.
  • Duplicate links: You've got a duplicate link to Christine Chatelain in the second paragraph of Production, one to the Pilot episode in the third paragraph and one to Spellingg Bee at the end of the second paragraph of reception.
  • Fixed.

Prose is certainly good enough for GA, although there are a couple of short stubby sentences - but that's an improvement over my bad habit of run on sentences. I think once those couple of points are resolved, then this should be fine for Good Article. Miyagawa (talk) 10:36, 7 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review. I've addressed everything. - Awardgive. Help out with Project Fillmore County 20:08, 7 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Great, happy for this one to be marked as a GA now. Miyagawa (talk) 21:03, 7 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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