Talk:Soviet destroyer Stroyny (1940)/GA1
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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 00:57, 15 January 2019 (UTC)
I'll take this one as well. Parsecboy (talk) 00:57, 15 January 2019 (UTC)
- Same comments as the other review about Stalin and the displacement
- " expended 2,387 130 mm shells" - similar issue to the other one - I believe the MoS advises against a pair of numerals next to each other. You might just say "2,387 main battery shells" or similar
- Ditto for the other instances of these
Nice work again. Parsecboy (talk) 14:48, 15 January 2019 (UTC)
- All done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:53, 15 January 2019 (UTC)
- Looks good, happy to promote. Parsecboy (talk) 20:57, 15 January 2019 (UTC)
- All done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:53, 15 January 2019 (UTC)