Talk:Soviet cruiser Vasily Chapayev/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 13:47, 15 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Images properly licensed
Link project number (List of ships of Russia by project number) in the lede
- Linked.
including Project 68bis insert "the"
- Added.
Move the links for class and cruiser to their first appearance in the lede
- Linked.
Suggest using a colon after NATO reporting name
- Added for all instances.
Add hyphen between high and pressure
- Added
Link bridge, hangar
- Linked.
in two barrel loaders ??
- Clarified.
Explain or delete L/80 (personally, I save caliber lengths for the class article, but that's just me)
- Removed.
Retitle the Electronic warfare section as Sensors and electronic warfare
- Amended. I have also adjusted the other section titles so that they are consistent with other articles (like Japanese battleship Ise)
Change the link and name for radome to Bulbous bow#Sonar dome
- Changed.
Serial number? Do you mean yard number?
- Yes. Edited.
Give the codenames for the Project 877 sub and the 1134B cruiser --Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:10, 29 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Added. I have also added the NATO codenames for the other vessels mentioned in the lead and body.

@Sturmvogel 66: Thank you for this review. I believe that I have made the changes. Please tell me if there is anything else. simongraham (talk) 16:18, 30 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]