Talk:Soviet cruiser Admiral Makarov (1970)/GA1
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Reviewer: Auntieruth55 (talk · contribs) 16:43, 26 May 2018 (UTC)
will start in the next coule of days. auntieruth (talk) 16:43, 26 May 2018 (UTC)
- lead is confusing. She was decommissioned because she was deteriorating, and the navy didn't have funding to repair her, right? That sentence needs clarity.
- Done. Kges1901 (talk) 20:27, 1 June 2018 (UTC)
- explain why class is different Nato to soviet
- Done by linking to NATO reporting name. Kges1901 (talk) 20:39, 1 June 2018 (UTC)
- paragraph on aerial threat. Admiral Makarov was armed with four AK-725 57 mm L/80 DP guns situated in two twin mountings Admiral Makarov was armed with four AK-725 57 mm L/80 DP guns situated in two twin mountings to protect against aerial threats.
- Done. Kges1901 (talk) 20:27, 1 June 2018 (UTC)
- . An engine room fire sparked by a lighted cigarette thrown into a ventilation shaft by a sailor was extinguished in three hours by emergency parties on 20 February 1988. how about On 20 February 1988, a sailor tossed a lighted cigarette into a ventilation shaft, causing an engine fire; emergency parties extinguished the fire in three hours, but the engine room....
- Done, unfortunately the source did not specify how much damage. Kges1901 (talk) 20:27, 1 June 2018 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.: {{GAList/check|y}
- No edit wars, etc.: {{GAList/check|y}
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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