Talk:Southworth Library (Dartmouth, Massachusetts)/GA1
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Reviewer: UnidentifiedX (talk · contribs) 11:25, 4 June 2022 (UTC)
- @UnidentifiedX hi! I've looked at your comments and have fixed up the article in line with them. Happy New Year. AdmiralAckbar1977 (talk) 21:24, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
Hello! I will be reviewing this article. You can track the assessments’ progress in the following table:
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Assessment
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| (a) (prose) | All issues resolved |  Pass
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| (b) (MoS) | The reviewer has left no comments here | Pass
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| (a) (references) | The reviewer has left no comments here | Pass
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| (b) (citations to reliable sources) | The reviewer has left no comments here |  Undetermined
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| (c) (original research) | The reviewer has left no comments here | Pass
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| (d) (copyvio and plagiarism) | You can view the report here | Pass
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| (a) (major aspects) | The reviewer has left no comments here | Pass
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| (b) (focused) | The reviewer has left no comments here | Pass
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| The reviewer has left no comments here | Pass
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| There is no ongoing edit war or content dispute | Pass
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| (a) (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales) | The reviewer has left no comments here | Pass
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| (b) (appropriate use with suitable captions) | The reviewer has left no comments here | Pass
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Comments
[edit]Here are some suggested improvements:
In 1878, the pastor of the Congregational church of South Dartmouth - Reverend Salter F Calhoun , formed
: Please change the 2nd comma to a dash, or vice versa.
…it was moved to Potter's Store
: Where is Potter’s Store?
…was moved to its final position
: Where?
The location there's rent…
: ???
The library gathered unemployed boys…
: Does your source mention what for?
There at one time was a …
: Please find a more specific date
was completed, and…
: Please remove the comma
Dartmouth Cultural Center
I would recommend expanding this section. With only 2 sentences, I couldn’t justify keeping the paragraph.
You could use https://www.dartmouthculturalcenterinc.org/history-1 or other online sources to help.
Further Edits
[edit]- Expanded Dartmouth Cultural Center
- …final position - at 404 Elm Street - was a…
: Added dashes
- …library worked as an assembly place for…
: A —> An
@AdmiralAckbar1977 Thanks for waiting. I’m happy to pass this article based off of the GA criteria. If you ever find more information relevant to the article, please don’t hesitate to add it; the only thing that could’ve stopped this article from passing is the length of the paragraphs.
Happy editing! UnidentifiedX (talk) 08:34, 14 January 2023 (UTC)