Talk:South Park season 13/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 06:11, 28 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hiya, I'll be reviewing this article. I've watched the majority of this season and have been following the episode article's, so I'll have experience with the subject in my review. I also assume this is the ending to a GT? Good luck with it. Now let's start! The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 00:29, 1 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

I think the infobox should be colored to match the image.
- Done. — Hun ter Ka hn 03:23, 1 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  - No, no, no, I mean gold, like the infobox image. The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 03:46, 1 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]
    - Oh, OK. Is this better? — Hun ter Ka hn 03:54, 1 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]
      - I've changed it to a different color, but I think doing the same to the episode list would be best. The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 02:42, 7 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"[...]three new seasons the duo agreed[...]" -> "seasons Parker and Stone agreed"
- Fixed. — Hun ter Ka hn 03:23, 1 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Explain why Kanye West was hurt by "Fishsticks," as it isn't said.
- I've tried rewording this a bit. Let me know if it works. — Hun ter Ka hn 03:23, 1 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  - Looks good. The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 02:42, 7 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Episodes

"B.J." and "slutty" seem kinda slang-ish.
- Changed. — Hun ter Ka hn 04:23, 7 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"Meanwhile, Stan attemps to return an expensive drink mixer make him[...]" -> "[...]Stan attempts[...]mixer, which makes him[...]"
- Made the changes. — Hun ter Ka hn 04:23, 7 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"[...]the issue was about a larger point about women's rights[...]" -> wording here?
- I've tried rewording it. — Hun ter Ka hn 04:23, 7 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Does hell really need to be wikilinked?
- Dropped. — Hun ter Ka hn 04:23, 7 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]
No ratings info for "Whale Whores," right?
- Unfortunately not. — Hun ter Ka hn 04:23, 7 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Production

Is "supervisor producer" the right wording?
- Nope, it should have been "supervising producer". I fixed it. — Hun ter Ka hn 14:20, 13 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Reception

Release

Images

Final say

I've decided to pass this article after the following are dealt with:

The episode table should be colored to match the infobox.
- Done, I think. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:25, 18 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]
The "Awards" section should be changed to "Award."
- Done. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:25, 18 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]
What exactly does "mini-audio commentary" mean? Is it an audio commentary that plays over the episode, or...?
- They are audio commentaries that play over the episode, but they only last four or five minutes, not the whole episode. From what I understand, Parker and Stone don't like doing them, so they do what they call "mini-commentaries". I tried to make the wording more clear. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:25, 18 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 00:31, 18 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, that's a pass! Nice work, Hunter. And I apologize for taking so long. Keep up the good work and I'll be sure to vote "yes" on this GTC. :) The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 23:39, 18 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]