Talk:Soul Love (David Bowie song)/GA1
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:14, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- "the opening track" perhaps "the album's opening track"?
- Done
- "on occasion on the" perhaps "on occasion during the" (to avoid on .. on)
- Done
- The genre is mentioned as "glam rock" in the infobox but nowhere else (nor referenced).
- Just removed it, easy peasy
- I think you could say it was released by RCA in the lead.
- Done
- Is there a link for common time?
- Yes! Added
- " 12-string acoustic guitar" could link as we've linked "bongos".
- Done
- "Bowie's sax solo" saxophone.
- Done
- "his sax solo" similar.
- Done
- Any chart performances from anywhere?
- Unfortunately nope.
Really, in very good condition already, so not much to worry about here! The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 11:06, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
- The Rambling Man All done. Thanks for reviewing! – zmbro (talk) 12:47, 27 September 2021 (UTC)