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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 08:53, 2 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]


Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs)

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

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Prose

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Lede

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@Lee Vilenski: All of the above have been addressed. I'm not sure how to best word the summary of the musical style section in the lede considering it only discussed one single, so I tried to make it as general as possible. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:31, 9 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

General

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@Lee Vilenski: All of the above have been addressed. As for the use of Twitter links, all of them are official Twitter accounts and so could be permitted under WP:ABOUTSELF. As for critical reception: as far as I'm aware, there are no reviews specifically about her voice acting whether in Japanese or English, and in fact I don't think voice acting reviews are that common when it comes to anime in the first place. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:31, 9 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.