Talk:Sopiko Guramishvili/GA1

GA Review

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 14:12, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I think this one has been sitting in the queue for long enough! — Ghost River 14:12, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Good Article review progress box

Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

WL the first instance of Georgia (country)
- MOS:OVERLINK discourages linking countries. I usually only link countries once in the infobox (as I did with the Netherlands). Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:22, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"After she was more intrigued by the chess pieces that they weren't using" → "After she was more intrigued by the chess pieces not being used"
- Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:22, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Change note [a] so that it reads "with a score of 7 points in 11 games (7/11), and the note just explains that a win is one point, a draw is 1/2, and a loss is 0
- Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:22, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
On that note, please add a citation to the note explaining how scoring works; it seems common sense, but if it must be explained in the article, then it should be cited.
- Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:22, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Write out and WL the first instance of the Fédération Internationale des Échecs (FIDE)
- Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:22, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"starting at 2142" → "ranked at 2142"
- It's a rating, not a ranking. (I didn't want to write "rated at 2142" to avoid repeating "rating" in the sentence.)
"At the former in Budva in Montenegro, she earned a bronze medal" → "She earned a bronze medal at the former tournament in Budva, Montenegro,"
- Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:22, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"but losing to ~~the winner~~ Ding" (you already mentioned that Ding won)
- Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:22, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"with a good performance" → "with a strong performance"
- Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:22, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Can you name the winners for the Georgian championship?
- Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:22, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"Guramishvili had a strong finish to the year at the World Youth Chess Championships," → "Guramishvili finished the year with a redeeming performance at the World Youth Chess Championships,"
- Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:48, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"Guramishvili consolidated her 2006 World Championship gold medal with another excellent year in 2007" → "Guramishvili followed up her gold medal-winning year with another impressive run of tournaments in 2007"
- Changed to "an excellent year" if that was what you were getting at?
Duplicate "Georgian" in the first sentence of the second paragraph
- Fixed. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:26, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"Later in the year in May" → "That May"
- Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:26, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"due to her opponents having a much higher average rating of 2492." → "as she had faced opponents with a much higher average rating of 2492."
- Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:36, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Reference [43] does not mention that Guramishvili and Giri eventually married
- Added. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:36, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"in November" → "that November"
- Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:36, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"was only sufficient for joint fourth place" → "was only strong enough for joint fourth place"
- Changed to "only put her in joint fourth place".
"an joint first-place finish" → "a joint first-place finish"
- Fixed. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:36, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Comma after "Femenino Ciudad De Linares"
- Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:36, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Comma after "Chennai Open in India"
- Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:36, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I think that the switching federations part should be in her career section
- Duplicated. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:32, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Delink Anish Giri, already linked above
- Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:32, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Archive all references using the tool
- I tried using the tool, but couldn't get it to work. You are welcome to do it if it works for you. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:48, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

All three pictures are Creative Commons licensed and are relevant to the article
No stability issues in the revision history
Earwig copyvio score looks fantastic at 2.9%!

Putting on hold now to allow nominator to address comments. Ping me if there are any questions. — Ghost River 14:38, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I made one change myself to eliminate MOS:PUFFERY. Apart from that, it looks good. Passing now. — Ghost River 01:14, 10 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]