Talk:Songs of Experience (David Axelrod album)/GA1

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 14:20, 6 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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"album Song of Innocence, he composed" -> "album Song of Innocence, Axelrod composed" (because you've mentioned other people between here and the last mention of Axelrod).
Looks like Blake's work was "Songs of Innocence and of Experience" (i.e. note the second "of").
"Like on his 1968" would prefer "As he had on his 1968..."
"gatefold LP" just links to gatefold so no need to include LP in the link. Particularly as you later link LP individually.
Was it Axelrod who "dubbed the album..."? If so, attribute that quote accordingly.

No author of liner notes indicated; changed to "liner notes stated". Dan56 (talk) 22:59, 7 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

"of majesty and "pastoral sadness", respectively" why only half of this in quotes?

Only "pastoral sadness" is taken verbatim from the source cited. Dan56 (talk) 22:59, 7 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Unfortunately no, either because it's not a notable enough release or the sales were non-existent. Dan56 (talk) 22:59, 7 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Could split refs into two columns.
Allmusic, gatefold comments above apply in refs too.
Spaced hyphens in ref titles should be replaced with spaced en-dashes ({{endash}}) per WP:DASH.

This was the only one I could find the ref titles. Let me know if there are any others. Dan56 (talk) 22:59, 7 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

A few comments, so I'll put the article on hold for a week. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:03, 7 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Addressed most points in this edit. Let me know if I overlooked something. Dan56 (talk) 22:59, 7 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]