Talk:Song Beneath the Song/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 15:38, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Issues

Image: Add "purpose of use" for image on page. It may be listed for deletion if you don't.
- Done. Rationale expanded. TRLIJC19 (talk) 16:26, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Image: Add a caption for the image. What is it?
- Done. TRLIJC19 (talk) 22:09, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Infobox: Add "running time" to the infobox
- Done. TRLIJC19 (talk) 22:09, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Lede: 18th → eighteenth
- Done, I also changed 44th to word form. TRLIJC19 (talk) 22:09, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Lede: it premiered on ABC on March 31, 2011 → it premiered on ABC in the United States on March 31, 2011
- Done. TRLIJC19 (talk) 22:09, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Lede: Remove guest star; add to Production section
- Done. TRLIJC19 (talk) 22:09, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Lede: The episode opened to mix reviewed from critics, and it was the second most viewed show of the night → The episode opened to mixed reviews from television critics, and it was the second most watched program of the night
- Done. TRLIJC19 (talk) 22:09, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Ratings: on Fox → on the Fox network
- Done. TRLIJC19 (talk) 22:09, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Reception: TV Fanatic doesn't need to be italic
- Done. TRLIJC19 (talk) 22:09, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Reception: Italic Grey's Anatomy (twice in the "Post-broadcast commentary")
- Done. TRLIJC19 (talk) 22:09, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Soundtrack: Need more references per WP:RS
- Done, I added a reference that gives the track listing. TRLIJC19 (talk) 22:09, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
References: Ref. 18 - TV by the Numbers doesn't need to be italic, as it is a publisher, not the official work
- Done. TRLIJC19 (talk) 22:09, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
References: Ref. 22 - TV Fanatic doesn't need to be italic
- Done. TRLIJC19 (talk) 22:09, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I'll put this on hold until issues fixed. TBran dl ey 15:38, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for picking up the article for review! I won't be around for the afternoon, but should be able to have all issues done by the end of the day. TRLIJC19 (talk) 15:48, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

All issues have been addressed. TRLIJC19 (talk) 22:09, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]