Talk:Sonam Kapoor/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 15:45, 1 October 2015 (UTC)

As requested JAGUAR  15:45, 1 October 2015 (UTC)

Initial comments

• "Kapoor has been nominated for three Filmfare Award " - plural on "Awards"
• "She studied theater" - theatre, given that this should use Indian English
• "Based on Fyodor Dostoyevsky's short story "White Nights"" - WP:OVERLINK short story
• "A biopic on athlete Milkha Singh" - what's a biopic?
• " Described as India's first "fashion film", Kapoor was particularly praised" - what film are we talking about here, is it Aisha?
• "shared some of Anne Hathaway's "early incandescence" and a Julia Roberts-like smile" - I think the "Julia Roberts-like smile" should definitely be in quotes

References

• No dead links, very good!

Close - promoted

I'll cut to the chase - this article is well written, comprehensive and the references all check out. It's a great article and already meets the GA criteria. I made a minor fix myself, so addressing the above are optional. Well done! It's rare that I promote these straight away :-D JAGUAR  19:33, 2 October 2015 (UTC)

Thank you so much for the pass. As for the other comments, I have addressed them. Biopic = Biographical film; it's a common word so I don't think it should be replaced. -- Frankie _talk 20:31, 2 October 2015 (UTC)