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Reviewer: Dom497 (talk · contribs) 18:52, 1 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    Quality of article is good.
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
    Article complies with MoS.
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    See comment section below. Issues fixed.
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    See comment section below. Issues fixed.
    C. No original research:
    See comment section below. Issues fixed.
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    All major aspects are covered about the topic.
    B. Focused:
    Article remains focused at all times.
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
    No bias found.
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
    Article is stable.
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    All images are licensed correctly.
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
    Images are provided where possible and captions are suitable.
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:
    Pass!--Dom497 (talk) 23:58, 1 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

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  • Take out reference number 9, and replace it with this reference which better supports the paragraph in the Layout section of the article.
  • I known this will sound like I am trying to be a pain, but, "Despite the lack of the vertical loop, the coaster continued to hold the record as tallest and fastest wooden roller coaster in the world" and "As of the 2012 season, the ride remains closed, and no announcements have been made concerning the future of the roller coaster" need references even though its obvious that the statements are true. Its just that without any references, the statements are considered original research.

--Dom497 (talk) 19:31, 1 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I have fixed both of these.--Astros4477 (talk) 20:12, 1 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"Despite the lack of the vertical loop, the coaster continued to hold the record as tallest and fastest wooden roller coaster in the world" still has no reference.--Dom497 (talk) 20:47, 1 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Done.--Astros4477 (talk) 21:12, 1 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]