Talk:Something Wicked This Way Comes (Iced Earth album)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 15:06, 8 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this sometime in the next couple days. Wizardman 15:06, 8 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

" rhythm guitarist Jon Schaffer, but instead, Jim Morris, who has worked on all of the band's albums from The Dark Saga onward, is the sole producer." This is a bit of a run-on, reword.
"The last three songs ("Prophecy", Birth of the Wicked" and "The Coming Curse") make up the "Something Wicked" trilogy, which introduces the central figure of the saga, Set Abominae (who also appears on the album's front cover)." cite preferred here
"Other guests featured on the album, included Howard Helm" rm comma
Not sure if the release and promotion section is appropriately titled, since nothing about the promotion of the album is really there, rather other albums are noted. Maybe just title it as release.

I'll put the article on hold and will pass when fixed. Wizardman 03:04, 11 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

All the issues mentioned above have now been fixed. --SilverBullitt (talk) 16:19, 11 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Everything checks out, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman 17:17, 11 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]