Talk:Somalia at the 2016 Summer Olympics/GA1
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 14:55, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
Will do this soon. JAGUAR 14:55, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
- "Other Somalian nations were competed at the 2016 Summer Olympics" - you mean nationals?
- " Prior to the competition, she spoke of the difference in the quality of the training facilities in Somalia compared to those in countries such as Jamaica and the United States" - would be good if this could be elaborated further. You could pull the quote given in the source
- "she came in 8th and last place with a time of 1:10:14" - why not just "last place"?
- No dead links
- DAB links OK
Another really short one. Will place on hold until all are clarified 
JAGUAR 17:54, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
- @Jaguar: Thanks for reviewing. Fixed the nations to nationals, added those quote and trimmed the 8th bit. Miyagawa (talk) 18:28, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks! Another one good to go.
JAGUAR 18:32, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks! Another one good to go.
