Talk:Solomon Islands at the 2012 Summer Paralympics/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 08:12, 5 August 2018 (UTC)

• I'll review this article. Courcelles (talk) 08:12, 5 August 2018 (UTC)

• "She did not medal at these Games." Change to something more positive about how she did do.
  • Added more detail does that work? Kees08 (Talk)
• Explain what "internationally classified" means; I think this is where the typical "disability classification" sections become useful.
  • Added a wikilink, is that good enough or should I write about it instead? Kees08 (Talk)
• " (also known as Hellen Tasaunga)[2]. " Ref after period.
  • I was not sure, since it was verifying the bit inside the parenthesis. Moved. Kees08 (Talk)
• Do we have a closing ceremony flag bearer?
  • Having trouble finding it, can you try? Kees08 (Talk)
    • Stymied myself, so withdraw comment. Courcelles (talk) 20:40, 5 August 2018 (UTC)
• Ref 3 seems not to prove what you're using it for.
  • It was redirecting. I looked at the Wayback Machine, and the original page only listed her as the only competitor, so it was not very useful. Removed it from the article. Kees08 (Talk)
• May as well list the officials, or at least the chef de mission, since we have their names.
  • Added specifics Kees08 (Talk)

• That's all from me. Courcelles (talk) 08:20, 5 August 2018 (UTC)

• Okay, promoted. Courcelles (talk) 20:50, 5 August 2018 (UTC)