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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:07, 24 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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  • "Produced by Rubalcaba" Perhaps, "Also produced by Rubalcaba"?
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:31, 29 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • " the album was released" Solo here and "the album" in the next sentence.
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:31, 29 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "received a nomination for a " -> "was nominated for a"
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:31, 29 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "and earned the" -> "and won the".
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:31, 29 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Background and release" section is a little confusing, you have the fact it won the Latin Grammy before talking about its release. Or are you referring to the Land of the Sun? If so, I'm not sure what relevance awards albums that have been awarded Grammys in previous years has to this article?
Fixed, I am trying to emphasize on his collaborative work which was succesful and his work on this album "solo". Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:31, 29 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "has "stock phrasing, but a pause in concentration before the sublime quality of a one-minute lullaby worth waiting for"" per WP:ATTRIB, according to whom? Check other quotes like this...
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:47, 29 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "from Charlie Haden" you don't need to repeat his first name, so Haden will suffice.
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:47, 29 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • " described as "breathtaking".[11][15]" by whom? You see what I mean? If it was described by "my mum" as breathtaking, I'd take it with a pinch of salt, but if a prominent notable composer or critic said it, I'd pay more attention.
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:47, 29 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "from Allmusic" link.
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:47, 29 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • And note, in the refs, you have this as Allmusic.
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:47, 29 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Not bad at all, a few issues as above, so I'll put the article on hold for a week. Let me know when you're done updating the article in accordance with the comments, or if you need any further explanation. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:33, 27 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you so much for your review!. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:47, 29 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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