Talk:Soldier of The Salvation Army

December 8, 2005. I updated a bit of this from The Salvation Army Year Book, 2005, and from The Salvation Army International Headquarters website: http://www1.salvationarmy.org/ihq/www_sa.nsf. Stephen Court, posted December 8, 2005.

Updated statistics from the 2006 Year Book and gave correct title for the book that replaced the Doctine Book. Al Ward, February 19, 2006

To do

Here's a list of things I think this page needs (or doesn't need), and I'm going to have a crack at fixing them as time permits. Anyone else feeling the need is more than welcome to put fingers to keyboard as well. I have suggested a few sections that need writing --- it may be more appropiate to break these out into their own pages.

Explain what the Pastoral Care Council is and that each Corps has one. Currently, the article seems to suggests that there is only one PCC.
Figure out what to do with the word 'Salvationist' in the first sentence. It currently redirects to The Salvation Army, which doesn't seem wrong, but not right, either.
The term 'articles of war' links to the article covenant. Again, this isn't wrong, but it doesn't seem entirely appropriate. I would suggest we need a section on the articles of war.
It seems strange that 'boy' and 'girl' are linked to the relevant articles, but 'covenant community' isn't.
Actually, I think we need a section on uniform here. Hmm, I see a flamewar approaching!
Do we need a link to 'Warriors'?
There is some language inappropriate to an encyclopedia --- for example, 'Salvationist Soldiers are considered by their peers to be covenanted warriors exercising 'holy passion' to win the world for Jesus.' I think we need to tone the jingoism down a bit.
More links to be excised: 'Orders' and 'Regulations' aren't need, IMHO. Again, a section ' the O&Rs wouldn't go astray.
The Year Book reference can be updated. Actually, YB 2008 should be out in the next month or two.

CammoBlammo (talk) 19:47, 28 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]