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Reviewer: CactiStaccingCrane (talk · contribs) 06:59, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Content feedback

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Formatting & styling

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  • Adding small text for credits to rover designers is not in line with Wikipedia's manual of style. You might want to merge it to prose.
  • Coordinates of landing should be replaced by name of relative location in Mars.
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  • Some lone-sentences should be merged to paragraphs.
  • Elements names don't need to be labeled with it's element symbol. This problem is fixed by me, Cacti. checkY
  • Some grammar mistakes are seen, although most of them are very minor. Some of the typo is fixed by me, Cacti.

Other than that, the article is very well done! Great job! CactiStaccingCrane (talk) 07:58, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your review! I am mostly offline till the end of the month, but I will definitely address all the points you mentioned. I'll ping you when everything will be resolved. Artem.G (talk) 17:27, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]