Talk:Soedardjat Nataatmadja

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Did you know... that Soedardjat Nataatmadja's instruction for parliamentary observers to wear traditional Sundanese clothing cost him his reelection?

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The result was: promoted by Amkgp (talk) 19:01, 22 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Soedardjat Nataatmadja

... that Soedardjat Nataatmadja's (pictured) instruction for parliamentary ~~attendants~~observers to wear traditional Sundanese clothing cost him his reelection? Source: see Soedardjat Nataatmadja#Sundanese culture and rejection for reelection

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Alatyr (mythology)
Comment: I don't know if readers would perceive this hook as intended in the article, so please give your suggestions for improvements.

Created by Jeromi Mikhael (talk). Self-nominated at 11:06, 5 December 2020 (UTC).[reply]

This has been nominated for Recent Deaths, which will not interfere with the DYK appearance. Article is new enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced. As all sources are foreign-language, unable to check for close paraphrasing. Images are public domain, but this one is very blurry.
Hook is interesting, but an inline cite is needed for this sentence: This incident culminated in Rudini refusing to recognize the reelection of Nataatmadja. I also wonder if you can use a shorter word than attendants, as the hook is full of long words. Maybe members? QPQ done. Yoninah (talk) 18:09, 7 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Yoninah: Attendants here means anyone who is invited to the election, including press, members, wife of members, husband of members, etc. Inline cite incoming.

@Yoninah: I've done your request.

@Jeromi Mikhael: Thank you for the cite. Then the expression is "parliamentary observers". Yoninah (talk) 18:12, 21 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Yoninah: ALT1: ~~... that Soedardjat Nataatmadja's (pictured) instruction for parliamentary attendants to wear traditional Sundanese clothing cost him his reelection?~~ Source: see Soedardjat Nataatmadja#Sundanese culture and rejection for reelection Regards, Jeromi Mikhael ^(marhata) 03:20, 22 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Jeromi Mikhael: ALT1 is the same as ALT0. All I want to do is replace "attendants" with "observers". Yoninah (talk) 13:50, 22 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Yoninah:My bad. Didn't notice that. I'll replace it right now. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael ^(marhata) 14:03, 22 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Yoninah: Done.

Thank you. I changed it in the hook too. Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 18:43, 22 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]