Talk:So Seductive

So Seductive has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.

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Date	Process	Result
June 22, 2012	Good article nominee	Listed

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:So Seductive/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 05:18, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):
b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Infobox

No issues

Lead

~~"So Seductive" is a song by American rapper Tony Yayo... → Make the sentence end there to comply with WP:BEGINNING~~ Done I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
~~...reaching number 48 on the US Billboard Hot 100:... → Add semi-colon at the end of this~~ Done I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Background

~~...of 50 Cent's album Get Rich or Die Tryin'... → Add year of release for "Get Rich or Die Tryin'"~~ Done I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
~~The group also released their debut album, Beg for Mercy... → Add year of release for "Beg for Mercy"~~ Done I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
~~...which involved wearing "Free Yayo" shirts advertising his situation... → Add semi-colon at the end of this~~ Done I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
~~...after receiving a call from the Shady Records offices advising him to do so:[4] → At semi-colon at end~~ Done I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
~~...titled Thoughts of a Predicate Felon, almost immediately after leaving prison... → Put year of release for album in parentheses~~ Done I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Writing and composition

~~According to WP:SAMPLE, an audio recording has to be less than 10% of the original recording (it needs to be less than 21 seconds and is currently 23 seconds)~~ Done (shortened to 19 seconds) I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 15:30, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Critical reception

No issues

Music video

No issues

Live performances

No issues

Awards and nominations

~~Get rid of this section, but put information in prose form in "Critical reception" section~~ Done I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Track listing

No issues

Credits and personnel

No issues

Charts

No issues

Radio and release history

No issues

References

No issues

After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put the article on hold at this time. There are some minor prose issues among others that are keeping this article from reaching good article status. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or address issues which you believe do not concern good article status, until a consensus is reached. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 06:14, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Since all of the issues have been addressed, I feel comfortable passing this article. Congratulations and keep up the good work! Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 17:45, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]