Talk:Snuffy's Parents Get a Divorce/GA2

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 16:49, 19 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'll give reviewing this a shot, different enough from my usual reviewing that it should be interesting. Wizardman 16:49, 19 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

The last reference doesn't seem reliable since it's just to Wikia; find a different one and make sure the data is all there.
Is there a way to tweak the lead? There are far too many references in it. I know some are unavoidable, but you should have zero difficulty cutting them in half here.
For that matter, the second para in the lead isn't part of the body text at all, so there is a summary style issue here.

The body of the article is fine, if slightly quote-heavy. Just retool the needed part and I'll pass it. Wizardman 04:01, 20 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

It's been a week and there's been no acknowledgement of anything, so I'm failing this. If this is addressed let me know and I can pass it next time. Wizardman 23:26, 27 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]