Talk:Small business/Archives/2018

Article Evaluation

I recently evaluated this article as part of a class assignment. I found that it could be improved in the following ways: -Needs more citations and verification -Needs a more "worldwide" view of businesses (I'm from America but suspect there are more traditional ways to run businesses when people come from small villages and everyone in a town is like family) -The demographic heading and information is 5 years old and needs updated -Under the "Marketing" heading there seems to be a biased statement about the owners of businesses -Many of the works cited are outdated -Some points seem copied and pasted from some of the sources

Raubsjosh (talk) 17:08, 8 February 2018 (UTC)

What I did

I recently added new sources and information to this article for an English class. I added information to the demographics section, retailers cooperative section, cyber crime, bankruptcy and also relationship and entrepreneurship. Most of the information was added to the cyber crime section which had no information prior so it was basically like I added a whole new section. Along with this information, I added sources to back up the info I gathered for this wiki page. I also intend on going through and finding older citations that haven't been backed up to make this a better source of information. Raubsjosh (talk) 16:05, 3 April 2018 (UTC)raubsjosh