Talk:Sin Ti (Inna song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 20:45, 28 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Will start this after the review for "Iguana" has been responded to adequately for passing. --Kyle Peake (talk) 20:45, 28 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Infobox and lead

Language and alternate title are mentioned in the lead, so not needed in the infobox
"(English: "Without You")" → "(English: "Without You")"

Things should be in bold only if something liks or redirets here with that name—which is not the case here.

"song recorded by" → "song by Romanian"
"for her sixth studio album" → "from her sixth studio album"
"A Spanish language song, "Sin Ti" discusses" → "A Spanish language track, the song discusses"
"was received with positive reviews" → "was met with positive reviews"
"to the singer's" → "to her track"
"music video for "Sin Ti" was uploaded onto" → "music video for the song was uploaded to"
"with the single's digital release" → "with its digital release"

Left this in place since the reader may think "its" refers to the music video

"it features the singer" → "the visual features the singer"

Background and composition

"and by Roc Nation elsewhere" → "and through Roc Nation elsewhere" to avoid repetition of by
Remove WikiLink to Inna
Change target Mastering (music) to Mastering (audio)
Change target Chorus (song) to Refrain
"thought it was about" → "thought the track was about"

Critical reception

Add an image of Inna with text instating that her vocal delivery was praised, as an article being illustrated is part of the GA criteria

As for "Ra", this article is so short it doesn't need to be filled up with more than one image. Plus you can already see Inna on the cover artwork. An extra image isn't a necessity.

Illustration by a form of media is part of the criteria and you can include a picture of her even if there's already one earlier in the article. There's other GAs that do this with musicians and if not here, add somewhere else more appropriate an image of sorts of you wish... Kyle Peake (talk) 06:40, 30 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"Currinn of CelebMix" → "Currinn" as he's already been introduced
", continuing her change" → ", viewing it as continuing her change"
"elements of her previous" → "elements of the singer's previous"
Remove WikiLink to Desire as it is useless
"makes the song sing."[6]" punctuation should be outside of quote for consistency
"he concluded his review" → "he concluded his review by writing"

Music video

"was uploaded onto" → "was uploaded to"
Change target director of photography to Cinematographer

Track listing

Good

Release history

Territory → Country
WikiLink Roc Nation
Glad you remembered to do the ref column correctly!

I nominated all these articles far before you started to do your reviews, so it's pure coincidence here :)

References

Archive all of these, the buttons is working as of current

It still doesn't work for me, maybe for you.

Change YouTube refs to simply state YouTube rather than via as we discussed before
For the various info in release history, merge refs for numerous countries as you know how to do by now as we've gone over this too

Final comments and verdict

This is actually one of your best yet; just a few issues then I'll pass but till then... On hold. Add a credits and personnel section as we know enough for one. --Kyle Peake (talk) 16:09, 29 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Kyle Peake: Responded to your comments. Cartoon network freak (talk) 06:43, 30 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Cartoon network freak: Needs a form of illustration, then I will pass and the cover art doesn't count as that's basic for any single that has one. Kyle Peake (talk) 06:47, 30 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Kyle Peake: There is no need for adding something that is not necessary. There is no policy implying that you must have an image in the article (not to say of this short size). Why do we have to overload an article with images; the cover is illustration enough. There is nothing you can add a photo to, and another photo of Inna is just useless. Cartoon network freak (talk) 06:54, 30 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Cartoon network freak: "The presence of media is not, in itself, a requirement. However, if media with acceptable copyright status is appropriate and readily available, then such media should be provided." You're actually right, will ✓ Pass this! Kyle Peake (talk) 07:01, 30 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]