Talk:Simplemente Lo Mejor/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 20:25, 4 November 2012 (UTC)

Comments

• "on the Mexican Albums Chart and the US Billboard Latin Pop Albums chart and number 33 on the Billboard Top Latin Albums chart" too many "and". the second "and" should be replaced with a comma

  Done.

• "commented "He's" can an "at" be added by "He's"?

  Wrote "comented that 'he's an artist...'"

• In the background section, "It debuted at No. 1", but in the lede it actually says "number 1", stuff like that, but not exactly that. Regardless, please do be consistent

  Fixed.

• Link Grammy Award per WP:UNDERLINK
• .Done.
• "an editor from Univisión" who? If unknown, I would just say "Univision"
• Nothing in the track listing section is referenced by reliable sources

  The tracklist uses the same link as release. I added the ref..

• Not part of the good article criteria, but it would be nice to have the table by meeting WP:ACCESS, the charts one, as well as the release history table

  Will do later [a bit tired now]. Thanks for the recommendation :)

• In external links, instead of stating the URL, state "Official website"

  Done.

Overall; good job. Once the above issues are addressed, I will pass the article based on the good article criteria. TBrandley 01:00, 6 November 2012 (UTC)