Talk:Signs and Wonders (The X-Files)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 22:28, 6 June 2012 (UTC)

Plot

• "Later, a woman, Iris,...", perhaps you can insert 'named' inbetween woman and Iris.

Production

• "In order to prevent future accidents, the mouths of the snake's...", snakes
• real-life does not need to be hyphenated

Broadcast and reception

• "writing "I have always been the type of person who admires the creative attempt, eve if the...", should that be even?

Only main concerns for GA, otherwise fine. Will hold. -- Lemonade51 (talk) 22:28, 6 June 2012 (UTC)

Thank you for the review. I've addressed everything you've brought up as well as fixed a few typos I caught.--Gen. Quon (talk) 22:49, 6 June 2012 (UTC)