Talk:Sierra Leone at the 2012 Summer Olympics/GA1
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Reviewer: 23W (talk · contribs) 07:19, 27 January 2015 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- The first sentence should be disemboldened (MOS:BOLDTITLE).
- "No Sierra Leonean athlete has ever won a medal at the Olympics": would precede with an {{as of}} template.
- "They both qualified after meeting the 'A' and 'B' qualifying standards": replace the single quote marks (') with doubles (").
- "and was 0.18 metres behind a qualification spot and therefore, Sesay did not advance to the final": would rephrase as "and was 0.18 metres behind a qualification spot, therefore not advancing to the final" to be less redundant.
Nicely done. On hold for 14 days. 23W 04:22, 29 January 2015 (UTC)
- @23W: All Done. Thanks for the review! good888 (talk) 08:42, 29 January 2015 (UTC)
- You're welcome. Nice catch with the capitalization of summer in "Summer Olympics". Passing. 23W 02:17, 30 January 2015 (UTC)