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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 18:30, 25 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]


I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:30, 25 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

  • Is recant the right word? Perhaps acknowledge would be more appropriate, but I'm not sure what you mean by this.
  • Good point, this was a leftover from an earlier phrasing. Fixed now.
  • External links OK, no DABs
  • Images appropriately licensed.
  • and starting on 24 September placed the city under siege awkward
  • Removed the 'starting'.
  • Suggest adding |lastauthoramp=y to the cite book template for multi-author works to match the ampersand used in the cites.
  • Wasn't aware of this parameter, thanks.