Talk:Siege of Damascus (634)/GA1
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Reviewer: Pyrotec (talk) 10:41, 13 January 2010 (UTC)
- Starting review. Pyrotec (talk) 10:41, 13 January 2010 (UTC)
Initial comments
[edit]- After a quick couple of read throughs, this appears to be a reasonably-comprehensive, well-referenced article of about GA-standard. In passing, I think that the WP:Lead needs a bit of work done; but I normally leave the review of the lead until last, so I will delay any detailed comments on that until I've completed my review of the main body of the article.
- I will now carry out a more detailed review. Pyrotec (talk) 20:31, 14 January 2010 (UTC)
- Background -
- I've done a few copyedits on grammar. This section is generally compliant. Pyrotec (talk) 12:13, 17 January 2010 (UTC)
- The siege -
- I've done a few copyedits on grammar. This section is generally compliant. Pyrotec (talk) 12:26, 17 January 2010 (UTC)
- Khalid's attack & Aftermath -
These two sections are generally compliant. Pyrotec (talk) 12:49, 17 January 2010 (UTC)
- WP:Lead -
- I've done a few copyedits on grammar. This section is generally compliant, but a bit more work would help improve it. Pyrotec (talk) 12:49, 17 January 2010 (UTC)
Overall summary
[edit]GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- B. MoS compliance:
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail:
Congratulations on the quality of the article, its now a GA. Pyrotec (talk) 12:59, 17 January 2010 (UTC)