Talk:Sidney Howe Short/GA1
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Reviewer: Whiteguru (talk · contribs) 04:13, 4 May 2021 (UTC)
Starts GA Review; the review will follow the same sections of the Article. Hopefully we will start anon. --Whiteguru (talk) 04:13, 4 May 2021 (UTC)
Observations
[edit]- It is reasonably well written.
- O.S.U. may be spelled out.
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:36, 4 May 2021 (UTC)
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- Reference 1 indicates there is no reference to "Sidney Howe Short".
- Done Replaced with news clip ref. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 13:21, 4 May 2021 (UTC)
- Internet Archive bot run on this page. Archival links were added to 2 references.
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 13:21, 4 May 2021 (UTC)
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- Article sticks the topic, is very spare about the work and contributions of this fellow;
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 15:03, 4 May 2021 (UTC)
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Neutral Point of View preserved.
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- Page created on 11 March 2017
- Page has 202 edits from 21 editors
- 90 day views = 232 pageviews with average of 3 per day.
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Sidney Howe Short 1880.jpg = is in the public domain in the United States because it was published (or registered with the U.S. Copyright Office) before January 1, 1926.
- Gold and Stock Telegraph Company 1874 ad.jpg = is in the public domain in the United States because it was published (or registered with the U.S. Copyright Office) before January 1, 1926.
- Overall:
- This fellow had over 500 patents, and was the founder (electrically) of street railways, master controllers for trams (street cars), and involved in Brush, General Electric, Westinghouse and Dick Kerr - all famous names in the origin of electric railways. A very succinct, short article, given this fellow's achievements.
- Minor corrections noted above. Once these are resolved, GA status will be passed. -- Whiteguru (talk) 06:04, 4 May 2021 (UTC)
- @Whiteguru: All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 15:50, 4 May 2021 (UTC)
- @Doug Coldwell: Excellent. Thank you for your work. --Whiteguru (talk) 22:06, 4 May 2021 (UTC)